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Old August 31st, 2012, 03:07 AM
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shomoher
 
Join Date: Nov 2010
Location: Hearthome City
Gender: Male
Nature: Calm
Ive downloaded and played through a few events...
The graphics look pretty cool and the storyline seems really interesting!
But the only aspect that prevents me from continuing is the horrendous grammar!!
Im not too fussy with small grammar errors... but almost every sentence in your hack is incorrect and it is really getting on my nerves...

If you dont have a proofreader, may I apply to be so?
Ill correct the sentences and send them to you (not sure if this is the correct way to do it though..)
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