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Old August 31st, 2012 (07:40 AM).
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Very cool, I love how you depicted the battle between Infernape and Gallade in chapter 2. Battles are very difficult to describe(heck, most action-filled chapters are) in words, I should know. But you nailed it, if you ask me. I'll look forward to the next chapter.
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