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September 2nd, 2012 (08:27 PM).
Uh, I didn't do it
Join Date: Aug 2011
Also, if when posting online it's standard to post with full spaces in between each paragraph.
Because it makes it easier to read it online. Right now it's a text wall. The chapters are, agreed, way too short. Also in writing you should use numbers, just spell them out; ie using 'five' instead of '5'.
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