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Name: Dillon Summers
Appearance: Dillon is a six foot one man, with light blond hair and electric blue eyes. He is fairly muscular, able to keep up with the stronger guys on his football (soccer) team. (although he quit last year) He's also strikingly handsome. His usual clothes are black jeans, black/violet converse shoes, t-shirts, and usually a jacket or hoodie of some kind. He spikes his hair up into an anime-faux hawk style hairdo, which is about two and a half inches tall, but the sides and back are buzzed down, so his haircut looks kinda stupid whenever he forgets to gel it. Also, Dillon wears a pair of purple foakleys (fake oakleys), which he always wears (whether on his shirt or on his face) He drives a motorcycle, and wears riding gloves/jackets and a violet helmet when on the road.
Personality: Dillon is an extremely laid back guy. He doesn't care about much, not even himself. He just wants to have fun, and he does what he wants. He doesn't do what he doesn't want, and usually that is any type of work. He is friendly to people he likes, and jokes around a lot, but is a downright dickhead to people he doesn't care for. He wouldn't hesitate to bash someone for asking a dumb question, or even call them out when they lie. Otherwise, he looks out for his "bros", and usually has their back. In school, he makes great grades on tests, as he is a very intelligent man. But he doesn't ever do homework, and only does classwork when its with a group (and by do classwork I mean copy someone else) so he sits in the top 10% comfortably and carefree. He cares for his grandmother, and does what he can for her. She looked after him until he moved out a year ago, and now he visits her often to make sure she's okay. I guess you could call her his weak spot for caring. His laziness doesn't often reflect on his appearance, however. He always makes sure to dress nicely and gel his hair the right way.
He is also a member of the marching band, and can play any brass instrument and the piano. His favorite thing to do is jam on his keyboard, and he can be seen carrying it throughout the halls on occasion, playing and singing loud songs. Most people either find this hilarious, awesome, or downright annoying. But he doesn't care, because he does what he pleases!
History: Dillon was born and raised in Melbourne, Australia. His parents were both wealthy doctors, and Dillon was expected to follow in their footsteps. From an early age, his parents stressed the importance of making good grades, and doing well in school. Dillon was focused and ambitious as a child, always competing to be the best in the class. He didn't have to, but he studied a lot and learned extra information, usually just reading the entire textbook collection on the subject. He soon discovered that this was completely unnecessary and a waste of time, and began to dwindle in his studies. He still made top scores in class, but he slowly stopped working for it. The breaking point into full out BIRDGAFosity (B**** I Really Don't Give A F***) was when his parents died. He was 13, almost in high school, when he just completely stopped. When his parents died, he came to the conclusion that nothing really matters, and he should just do what he wants, before he dies unexpectedly. He still made good grades, but only because his perfect test average pulled up his 25% classwork/homework average. He lived with his grandmother until last year. He moved out because her small apartment was getting crowded for the two of them. He tried renting an apartment nearby, but he couldn't find one for the right price. He now lives with his friend George's dad's hotel, getting a special discount on a room to stay in.
He has been doing a lot of potentially dangerous things lately, like trading in his car for a motorcycle, and recklessly stopping a convenient store robbery on his block.
Powers: His first human power is to sap/build others' willpower. He can simply make them not want to do something, or even reverse it and drive them to it. His other power is to tell if someone is trying to deceive him. He basically turns into a human lie detector, only instead of reading heart beats or other bull crap he just knows if they are lying.
Appearance: Dillon's holy form mainly changes clothing. He dons a pure white version of his black jeans, with a golden t-shirt that has a white and black piano keyboard on it. His shoes go from violet to gold, with white laces instead of black. His blonde hair turns slightly golder, and his glasses turn pure gold. His eyes go from bright blue to livid green, and the pulsate with yellow and gold energy deep inside. He also grows a pair of large, feathery wings, the feathers being the same color as his hair.
Artefact: "Welcome to the Temperate Zone", the sunglasses. They are secured with magic on his face, and are non removable by any force besides his own. His sense of humor shows when he names these.
MASSive power: Dillon can control his mass, becoming more dense to become an unmovable object, or lowering it to become intangible. This can be spread to what he is touching, though it takes more focus to do more than his clothes.
Karmic Optics: Dillon can see if a person is doing something wrong or evil, or if they are about to do something wrong. When he looks at an evil-doer, the glow red. If he sees a person doing the right thing, they just look normal.
Soul Seeker: Dillon can read a person's soul, which can give him information on every karmic decision they have made in their life. It also grants him the ability to see their desires, hopes and dreams, as well as fears or regrets.
Sunlight Blade: Dillon can create swords made of pure white energy. Ironically they are gold in color, and he dubbed them sunlight blades. They are sort of like light sabers, only much cooler looking. (think of him holding a thunderbolt as a sword)
Appearance: Dillon turns demon, growing Taurus like black horns from his head. He also has a long, black furred tail as well. His hair turns black, and his eyes go from blue to glowing red, with blackness coming off of his pupils and seeping into his irises. His fingernails turn into a more claw like state, and turn black. His teeth are sharp and pointy as well. His clothing changes into all black everything, with red shoes and belt. His skin also changes to be grey instead of its white-ish color. He can grow wings too, but they can also be hidden from sight.
Willpowerups: Can steal away peoples willpower to power himself up. The more intent the enemy is on fighting him, the stronger he becomes.
ChronoKinetics: Can manipulate time. Basically, he can freeze time itself, or slow it down or even speed it up. He can also travel around in time, but has to create a stable time loop to do so. (think the hourglass necklace thing in Harry Potter)
Insect manipulation: Dillon can recruit insects to do his evil bidding! Even though it says insects, spiders and other arachnia can be used too.
Webbing: Dillon can shoot webs, like spider-man!