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Old September 18th, 2012 (02:22 AM). Edited September 18th, 2012 by Volcanix769.
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A person already proofread this in my dA account, and like I said, I'm not a good writer and that I said that not all of them make any sense. And I already proofread this and that I made a reference of them in Bleach and Final Fantasy, so no, it's not a crossover. e-o And that I tried to make them have character, but it's in the development stage, also for some of the words, I used a thesaurus to make them more scientific. I know that your giving me criticism but it felt a little harsh. Anyways, thanks for pointing this out so I'm changing this. Also, it was in the bushes, so it did cloak itself.
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