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Old September 25th, 2012 (5:16 AM).
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IceFyr1928: There are some things I need you to change. First off there is no mention of your character having Dyslexia and ADHD, all demigods have that. Another thing is there is no school for half-bloods, he would likely be moved from school to school until he was told he was a demigod, be that by his mother, a vision from his father, or a satyr sent to take him to camp half blood. You also haven't said how many years he's been at camp, I'd recommend at least two.
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