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Old October 13th, 2012 (9:39 AM).
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If it's not complete, then you shouldn't have posted this. That's against the section's rules. And if you rushed into this, then you shouldn't have posted it until you could work on it more so it doesn't have the rushed quality to it.

Think about other ideas you could use for this, especially since you admit that you're using the Final Fantasy series and Bleach for inspiration. Look at them and find what it was that inspired you for this, and then think about how you could use those ideas in your story.

Just don't post incomplete, rushed work.
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