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Originally Posted by dracoflare
After reading many fanfictions from other authors and my own, I must say I have missed your writing for the past two weeks or so. It's like eating homemade food after eating the flimsy food in my college food court lol.
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Ah, you're too kind.
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Originally Posted by dracoflare
I was surprised actually. In the last chapter when Teiresias failed to spot Lauren and Co., I thought he was betraying the organization for some hidden reason, but it seems that was not the case.
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No, Teiresias is no friend of Lauren. It's just that... well, I can't say very much without giving things away, but something about Halley interferes with the way he perceives people.
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Originally Posted by dracoflare
About his powers, based on the description, I believe it to be a Dark Pulse.
But then again you might have your own version of some other attack or it could be a completely different power.
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I never actually thought what it might be. I just thought about what Teiresias is, and what sort of power might therefore be appropriate for him. It isn't intended to be any sort of Pokémon move in particular.
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Whatever it was, it was definitely scary. Those descriptions are really amazing and did what they ought to do.
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Thank you. I spend more time writing Teiresias than on any other character; since it's in his nature to inspire fear in others and prey upon them in that way, I've been trying to reflect that in the way I write about him. And I'm not particularly used to writing fear, so it takes me a while.
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Originally Posted by dracoflare
I liked your intro of Cheren and Bianca, I am glad that you are using both of them. I am really looking forward for their involvement in the next chapter, or the coming chapters.
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Me too. We'll be seeing a lot of them soon enough - and through different eyes, too.
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I wonder how the government agent and Teiresias managed to catch up with Lauren though. But I can guess that, them being supported by the organization hidden in the dark, it is not much of a surprise. They could have taken a flight or something? Not sure.
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Ah, I know exactly how they got there, but I won't tell anyone just yet. You'll find out soon enough.
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I know life's a *****, but I am looking forward for your next update!
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A masterly bit of understatement there. My life has changed recently, and I'm only just getting used to the fact that my social life now requires a far greater expenditure of time than it used to, owing to the iniquities of public transport. I do try and write on trains and buses, but I can't work properly unless I'm typing; the screen is an extension of my mind, where I can cut, add and rearrange the words continually until I get finished sentences. I'm terrible at just getting down a story and editing it later; I always have to edit as I go along.
Anyway. I must away!
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