Thread: [Pokémon] Hackers [15]
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Old October 17th, 2012 (01:55 AM).
Cutlerine
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Quote originally posted by c1234321:
I found it! At the end where it says "This are real state secrets we're working with here." The 'this' should be a 'these.' Oh and I just noticed. Where it says "agree Blaine distractedly" it should be "agreeD Blaine distractedly."
Cheers. Must've missed those.

Quote originally posted by darkpokeball:
Awesome new chapter! Been looking at this fic for a while! Once more, it had me all the way until the very end, and once more, I was impressed. Looking forwards to the third chapter.

On a side-note, how long is this story going to be? Just out of curiosity.
Thanks. I don't actually know how long this is going to be. I think it might end up being somewhere shorter than my usual long chaptered fics, but not too much longer; I have the main plot twist in my head, but there are several places it could go after that. Business as usual for me, I guess.

Thank you all for reading!

F.A.B.
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