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Old October 20th, 2012, 05:37 AM
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gimmepie
The Seeker of Pies
 
Join Date: May 2012
Location: Australia
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Nature: Mild
Your pokemon need abilities (that they actually can possess), you need to say what he did on his one day prep at the island. SHOULD be fine once that is done but I recommend you keep practising your English skills

Edit: I have posted in the IC thread. Let me know if you notice any errors I'm fairly tired and just typed the whole post then. I hope you'll all join in soon.
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