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Old October 27th, 2012 (10:10 PM).
Heracles4 Heracles4 is offline
Join Date: Oct 2012
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This is a brilliant piece of writing. It has a ton of very good literary elements, and just good stuffz ;_;

My only irk is that the 4 person team is a 4 person girl team. Not being sexist, but it just seems unrealistic.