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Old November 3rd, 2012 (08:50 AM). Edited November 3rd, 2012 by Volcanix769.
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I need someone to read my fan-fiction, I posted 3 chapters a week ago, and it's then second time I write in first person and that I barely got feedback. It's in my quotes at the bottom of this comment, I need feedback in this!
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