You said that you weren't checking carefully. This is getting all backwards now. But one thing for sure is that you should be proofreading before you even post, and the thing about trying is that you should actually try to provide some sort of imagery and other descriptions to give flavor to your story.
Yeah but in my style, it's not really easy and I just end up frustrated. Like I've been observing many people's work to get ideas of imagery. But when I try to do it, it just ends up wrong.