The Children Are Hunted (OOC)
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November 6th, 2012 (4:39 PM).
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Icy Burn thank you for the edits and you are accepted!
DeLaMuerte, your SU seems unrealistic. It's a good idea for a character, but the parents being that unintelligent and ignoring their child without any real showing of psychological repercussions is unbelievable, to be blunt, especially after taking advantage of his successful finds like that. I'd recommend taking a look over it again and making it more plausible. Until then you are pending.
Alright, understood. I'll fix it. I see where it went wrong (and I have to agree, it was unrealistic looking back at it), so I'll edit it quickly.
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