Pokemon: The Walking Dead [M] (OOC/SU)
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November 17th, 2012 (09:18 AM).
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Join Date: Feb 2012
Nice SU, but there -are- a couple of pointers. The point where our characters start off in the RP, is about two weeks or so into the infection, so the SS Anne thing would have happened approximately two weeks ago, more or less, and they would have found a way to get rid of the infected on the ship, since it's now a 'haven' if you can call it that, for non-infected. No problems here, just keep in mind when in the story this is.
Secondly, in your opening post, I'd really like you to put some line breaks here and there. You know, after a period, just push enter twice and work on a new line. As it is now, it's a little hard to read, but not impossible. Just a couple pointers.
If you keep this in mind and go and do the line breaks in the opening post, then consider yourself
When does a man die?
When he is hit by a bullet? No.
When he suffers a disease? No.
When he eats a soup made out of a poisonous mushroom? No!
A man dies when he is forgotten.
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