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Old November 19th, 2012, 02:55 AM
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Skymin
the gratitude pokémon
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: australia
Age: 21
Nature: Quirky
Detwak's Digital Destruction is declined.
The story is really vague. You'd have to explain where digimon came from in the first place, why they attacked, why they were chosen. You'd also have to explain who the new threat is and what kind they pose as normal people wouldn't fight someone just because they were 'evil'. d:

~Genevieve~'s Legendary Guardians is accepted!

Flydro's Tainted Waters: The Wrath of Suicune is accepted!

Manganum's Pokémon: Aether's Edge and IC thread is accepted!

Zero Darkness Imagination - When dreams comes true is declined.
The concept is good, but it doesn't make much sense. Why are these things happening? You'll need to explain more of a back story.
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