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Old November 24th, 2012 (07:53 AM).
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Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: The Cake Contraption in Wish Park!
Age: 20
Nature: Lonely
OK, thanks Psyanic. Hmmm, I tend to overuse ellipsis and commas. How about
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I sat munching some pork that I had just cooked in my furnace through the night, slightly - no, that's an understatement - petrified because of the freaky noises outside my small shack...
What do you reckon?
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