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November 25th, 2012 (10:16 AM).
Join Date: Nov 2012
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By Pvt Tamama(Jake)
We all have had or will have a first kiss, it only happens once, and you always remember it for the rest for your life. You remember it when your 20,30,40 and when your old this is the story of a first kiss. I was 11 years old in 5th grade slacked off and was on the computer most of my time. I only really hung out with one person besides my mother outside of school. Her name was Jenna, Jenna was my neighbor she had bleach blond hair and was the same age as me. She was home schooled but was extremely intelligent and funny. Everyday after i would come home from school she and i would sit outside and play a card games such as yu-gi-oh, pokemon and magic the gathering. It was awesome and even though i didn't know at the time this was the dream girl of any boy such as myself. She was not annoying or scary. Whenever you looked into her blues you would get lost because of how beautiful they were, maybe that's why i lost so many duels to her! She never would curse neither would i we were both very sheltered at the time though that has changed a lot since then. She was perfect the kind of girl you want to marry have kids with and then have those kids have kids! Well anyway one day we had been playing a game of yu-gi-oh and i was telling her about school and how i didn't have many friends there only one but he got bullied a lot his name is mason he is not relevant right now though. She said she was sorry that i didn't have any friends then she asked "Well um is there any girls there you have a crush on?" My face turned bright red like a new red marker and i said no i didn't. "don't mess with me Jake i know you do!" Jenna yelled at me in a jokingly tone. "I swear i don't!" i said in a nervous voice. "Ok Whatever you say" she said as she laughed. We kept on playing yu-gi-oh for about a hour of course she was whooping me at with her Super power deck with ever card being awesome. After a while her mom yelled from inside her house "Jenna time to eat come inside!". We put the cards away and back in are deck boxes then she sat on the sidewalk where we battled and was not moving she looked like she was going to cry. I was getting up pretending not to notice it then she said trying not to cry "This is the last time we will ever duel" "what why?" I said confused she stood up brushed her long hair out of her eyes ran up to me rapped her arms around me so tight she squeezed the air out of me then she looked me in the eyes then looked away then looked back and closed her eyes still hugging me then she moved lips up to mine and they touched i freaked out i was startled i didn't show it though i closed my eyes quick and kissed back her lips were soft like soft ice cream yet inviting like a fireplace my heart raced i swear i was having a heart attack then she let go and moved her lips from mine and said "I love you". She ran back to her house. I went to my house not being able to sleep that night i was confused i didn't know what to think. Morning came still no sleep. My mother asked me to take out the trash to the trash can i walked outside and saw something that would be burnt into my memory for the rest of my life. A U-haul truck at Jenna's house.
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