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Old December 3rd, 2012 (06:24 PM). Edited December 3rd, 2012 by Stodd.
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Bob's Life in School- Needs some format and grammar improvements. But the injuries are oddly specific and thus, somewhat disturbing. Not the scariest, but still good story.

Marowak the Avenger- I have the same comments for this story. You are on your way. Keep writing.

Now, let me see something that will terrify me. I want something that will frighten me to my very core.

Marowak the Avenger- I have the same comments for this story. You are on your way. Keep writing.

Now, let me see something that will terrify me. I want something that will frighten me to my very core.
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-I/II gen are the only great gens; things get pretty ridiculous after that.
-gen I/II have the best Pokemon and stories, by far!
-All of these weird Poke's and typings in III/IV/V are unrealistic and don't look appealing!
-The best thing about modern generations are the moves! I like Aerial Ace and Water Pulse.

Gen I and II are SUPERIOR
BY FAR