Aaaah! I've had this story sitting in my 'Drive for so long, how the heck did I not catch these mistakes?! Thanks for pointing them out.. I'll try to avoid them in later chapters. Sorry..
Anywho, thank's for 'reviewing.' I'm so used to FF, this is so different.. >.< Sorry for any slang that I don't notice, I live very far south, where slang is heavy. I'll try to get a beta soon.