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Old December 6th, 2012 (06:20 PM).
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Recently I've been writing a fanfic/LP called, "Dash, a childhood in Johto;" and it's working ok. However the sentences aren't entirely interesting. Most of them are simply stating actions with some adjectives thrown in. So I'm looking for some tips on writing interesting-er, "Filler," sentences to make the paragraph more interesting. Any and all help is appreciated :3
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