I don't know how productive it will be to correct grammar on a screenshot-per-screenshot basis. ppooookkkkkkk, your first language isn't english and you're only 11, so it's understandable that you'll make mistakes. If you really want help with it, maybe get someone else to write your game dialogues for you?
You sound like you have a lot of cool ideas, so keep working! I'd love to see the fakemon that you make. Remember to zoom in, and don't resize and stretch the sprite. Look up some spriting tutorials, maybe? You can also post your sprites in the spriter's showcase thread and get feedback and suggestions on how to improve.