The storyline is errr... well to plain. I want to know more since I can't tell anything based on the screens. The hp bars and textbox are too pink-purple and very bright. Same with the grass/tree palette. You should change it a bit.. And for the mapping, it needs improvement. On the first screen, the houses are too close to each other. Not much room for movement. And on the other screens , they are to empty. Based on the 5th screen, I think that the Pokecenter and Pokemart are the same building but recolored which is not really a good idea. Its better if you just combine both like in B/2. And the water. You put too much water that shows off the reflection. The heroes overworld looks cool. Well, that's pretty much it. I wish you the best of luck on this hack
