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Old December 25th, 2012 (12:41 PM).
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Originally Posted by DaSpirit View Post
Some critique:
  • There are trees on the mountains. Makes little sense.
  • The rocks look randomly placed. It should look natural.
  • It's weird how the patch of grass around the rock is square. Make it not square. :p
  • The tree next to the square patch of grass also looks random. Add more behind it or in front of it.
  • There should be waves hitting against the mountains where they meet the water. Also, make it the sand less square.
    Nothing is square in real life. The mountain on the other hand looks great.
Map redone I think now it's better
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