While some of the tiles are iffy, I understand that they're just placeholders until you can get better ones.
The story was pretty good, but I couldn't help noticing this:
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Your father, the regional champion, left you and your mother when you were just a small child for reasons unknown. You and your father are distant, but you understand that he had his reasons for leaving.
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Haha, I would expect you and your father to be distant if he's been gone for years...
As always this hack has potential, I hope you can bring in some quality that most hacks haven't been able to do lately. Good luck!