Oak it's very old to have another Pokémon adventure. Nah, just kidding. Your game looks great! The story it's not bad, but it has got to continue, you only are saying us what happens at the beggining of the game. Also the game's design needs to work on it. For example, in tiles. You're mixting different styles, HG/SS, BW, D/P... And a game should have only one style, or a cool mix. But it's not this case. Sprites are fine, but all isn't the graphics part. The remainder is nice! Althought I have said many fails from the game, I only said the fails for improve, the good points don't need to be named. In general, this game is nice! So, continue! Hope to see the advance and more screens from Pokemon Melanite! Greetings!