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@Kirito-Kun: Ouch... There are two ways we can judge an SU. We can judge it on the Personality and History, or the Opening Post. I'm afraid that all three sections of your SU that are up for judging are extremely short and don't provide us with any means of properly evaluating your character. That being said, we need a /lot/ more details in the personaliy / history section, or a significantly better opening post. (I might recommend the former. It's easier.)
I apologize if it comes off as strict, however it's my belief that the RP will be funner for you once you /do/ get in if you take the time to make a great character.
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