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Old December 31st, 2012 (12:45 PM).
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Really wants shiny Porygon Z:3
Silver Tier
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: A house
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Nature: Bold
Posts: 2,588
@Danaxe: You need to expand your SU a bit, mostly in appearence and history. Your appearence is way to short to come up with any kind of image for a character. What about his height? His figure? Think of stuff that'll make it easier for the others to come up with an image in their head or use a picture yourself. As for the history, while the history is infact ten lines, I think using dialogue to fill in the ten line quota is kind of exploiting the rule a bit. Describe the history a little more, your free to keep the dialogue though.

@WolfOfEve: Your good to go. Accepted

Trainer Academy RP Pokemon
Snype (Sableye)- Lv. 52- Detect, Shadow Sneak, Will-o-wisp, Low Sweep, Foul Play, Taunt (Ability: Keen Eye)
Commodore (Porygon-Z)- Lv. 55 -Signal beam, Conversion 2, Recover, Tri Attack, Ice Beam, Trick Room (Ability: Trace)
Len (Poliwraith)- Lv. 53- Bubblebeam, Brick Break, Body Slam, Belly Drum, Sleep Talk, Rest (Ability: Water Absorb)
Able (Ninjask)- Lv. 46 - X-Scissor, Slash, Double Team, Protect, Baton Pass, Swords Dance (Ability: Speed Boost)
Kara (Gligar) Lv. 35 Acrobatics, Substitute, Fury Cutter, Knock Off, Slash,Toxic (Ability: Poison Heal)
Xerox (Ditto) Lv. 35 Transform (Ability: Imposter)

(In Box)
Shedinja- Lv. 35 Fury Swipes, Confuse Ray, Sand attack, Leech Life, Mind Reader, Scratch (Ability: Wonder Guard)
Omanyte- Lv. 35 Brine, Mud Shot, Rollout, Ice Beam, Protect, Bite
(Ability: Swift Swim)
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