Cracked, or How the Love of Seafood Saved Unova
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January 3rd, 2013, 03:34 AM
Gone. May or may not return.
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: The Misspelled Cyrpt
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I was checking regularly and was about to give up. And then Yay a new chapter!
- Personally I don't see anything poor about this chapter.
- The Shakespeare references never get old.
- Aww, no helicopters yet.
- Regarding Decoyote: whoa major hint drop! Are we gonna see Pearl too?
That is all.
Ah, OK. Thanks for that. I guess I thought it would be worse because it would reflect everything happening while I wrote it... I suppose I can separate fiction and reality better than I thought. Huzzah!
As for helicopters, there
one... but it was in the prologue, which I took out before I posted it.
Regarding Decoyote... I just like the idea of them, I'm afraid. I won't rule out appearances from characters from previous stories, but I only have one of them planned out right now, and it isn't Pearl.
Thanks for your feedback!
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