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Unread January 9th, 2013, 06:46 AM
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Serperion
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Join Date: Dec 2012
Gender: Male
Nature: Calm
If this is the starter town its good with keeping to Nintendo's style however a bit of diversity is still good I mean take Aspertia City for one its unique for having a Pokemon Center, Gym and Trainer School as part of the hometown. I don't think having the berry trees is a good idea because they are all mean to be accessible in the games. Also all the plants seem to formal you have rectangles of flowers and shrubs and the trees look like the were built there they don't seem natural. Also if this is a Starter Town you should have one House bigger to refer to the player. Otherwise most of the stuff is ok maybe squash it in horizontally but its not bad.
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