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Old January 16th, 2013 (03:40 PM).
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Skymin Skymin is offline
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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TheUglyDucklett IC thread is accepted!

Drago Dragonite's Pokémon: Nightmare's Revenge is declined.
You may have improved the storyline but your punctuation is still quite poor. Don't forget to add spaces after full stops and commas and try to make use of paragraph structuring.

jov0006's Pokémon: The Five is accepted!
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