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Old January 16th, 2013 (03:40 PM).
Skymin
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Age: 21
Nature: Quirky
TheUglyDucklett IC thread is accepted!

Drago Dragonite's Pokémon: Nightmare's Revenge is declined.
You may have improved the storyline but your punctuation is still quite poor. Don't forget to add spaces after full stops and commas and try to make use of paragraph structuring.

jov0006's Pokémon: The Five is accepted!