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Old January 17th, 2013 (12:55 PM). Edited January 17th, 2013 by Xlugon Pyro.
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Did you still want Oda to talk over things with Xoxaa? You had mentioned this was Oda's intention to occur sometime during the ball but it looks like the ball's almost over. D:


Also, if one of your tense criticisms is directed towards me, I've been concentrating on keeping the tenses proper in the context of whether or not an event is happening at that moment or has already occurred in the past. It feels more right and is more accurate to the situation since I'm not telling a story so much as describing a real time account of my character's actions. If this is still an issue, feel free to let me know.
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