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Old January 24th, 2013 (10:45 AM).
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Join Date: May 2011
Location: in the flowers
Gender: Female
I think you sort of covered everything you needed to change or improve on in your own descriptions, tbh. The one comment I can make overall, is to make sure you add equal amount of shading too all parts of the Pokemon. For instance, all of them are shaded out pretty well, but you don't add any shading in the eyes so they end up looking flat when compared to the rest of the Pokemon. Like xxkaylabby said before, Kitturn suffers from this lack of depth the most.

Overall though, your concepts are very strong! As long as you pay attention to your positioning and anatomy [which clearly you are from what I gather from your comments], you'll be well on your way! Good luck on your game, I hope that works out well for you! Can't wait to see the completed dex ;)
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