Thread: [Pokémon] Tales of a Team Rocket Orphan
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Old January 27th, 2013, 07:28 PM
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I enjoyed every second of my life while reading this! It's so creative and descriptive! Your eloquence is endearing! The battle scene between Atticus and Seth was phenomenal. I felt the whole time like I was spectating the entire battle; well, truthfully, I can say I was picturing the whole chapter during the entire time I was reading it! For a first fan fiction, you did an excellent job.

Bravo! I cannot wait for chapter two!
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