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Old January 28th, 2013 (05:09 PM).
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The_Consumer
 
Join Date: Dec 2012
Location: Ireland or Leicester
Gender: Male
Short sentences with sudden, dramatic turning events:
"He thought it was gone. That it would never haunt him again.
Suddenly he heard a noise, deep beneath the metal containers covered in dust and debris blocking the horrendous port into the basement.
It wasn't gone.
It was still there."

Make it as visual as possible.
Be as descriptive as possible.
Make it interesting to yourself most importantly, let your imagination flow and write down your thoughts. It all comes down to your style of writing and mine certainly doesn't suit everyone. With great diligence comes great results, anyone can write