@Flydro - This character seems interesting but you need to fix the part where it says he died. Mortals don't become Reapers through dying, if anyone mortal or immortal dies they go to Heaven or Hell or become lost souls. Reapers are selected and brought to Limbo whilst still alive. Fix that and then you are in.
Edit: You also need to include him facing repercussions for the unwarranted killing of a mortal who wasn't a target because it goes against the rules of being a reaper.