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Old February 19th, 2013 (01:20 AM).
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Fossil Fusion's Pokemon Rainbow Canyon is accepted!

Inferna's The Illusion of Stallant is accepted!

Eeveelution Co-ordinator's Performing for Sinnoh! is declined.
You could really develop your storyline a little more, perhaps go into more detail why the players are going into co-ordinators and perhaps go into more detail about about the evil organisation. Also, you have no rating.

Miss Doronjo's PokeKhermia: The Flow of Mana is accepted!

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders Of The Night is declined.
This really has potential! You really need to develop the storyline more, perhaps add a backstory about the different gangs and their relationships.
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