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Old February 19th, 2013, 06:59 PM
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Originally Posted by Derxwna Kapsyla View Post

This is honestly the first time I've attempted to construct an original dungeon, without copying any other maps. I'd really appreciate some legitimate and serious constructive feedback if possible, so I know how and where need to improve.
I like it, it seems pretty cool. I like the idea of it and how its set up but it just seems...cluttered in some places, and empty in others: empty near the top left of the main map, and cluttered with the amount of barrels in one area. Good job! 8/10


heres a map of mine, its a hidden village from my forest, and players who manage to find this will have a nice reward ;P but you need to work for it! its a rough draft, and I need to add some cabins or huts, but this is a base.
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