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Old February 23rd, 2013 (11:28 PM).
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Skymin
part time demon hunter
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: AU
Age: 21
Nature: Quirky
Jake♫'s IC thread is accepted!

雷影 イチロ's Atlantis Awakening is accepted!

Wild_Squirtle's Defenders of the Night is declined.
This is better, but you'll need just a little more. You've got the background all sweet, but I think you'll need a paragraph outlining what is happening between the groups right now.

StinkomanFan's Lime Light is declined.
Um... I really don't understand what this roleplay is... the storyline is really... a one person thing. It doesn't feel like something that needs more than one person.

StinkomanFan's Five Trainers on a Search for an Exit is declined.
The storyline sounds okay, but you really need a backstory to explain why scientists would build something like this. You also need a sign up sheet and a rules section!
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