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Old February 24th, 2013 (08:17 AM).
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Not a too bad idea but it needs a little work.
1-Sengoku, Gohan this comes from DBZ. Be creative, people like it when you came with something yourself instead of copying it.
2-Is the player's dad disparition involved in the beast or Neo Team Shadow?
3-The plot needs some work too.
This isn't a so bad idea but you need to work on it like i said above. Good luck with this.
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