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Old February 24th, 2013 (08:31 AM).
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DialgaPrime
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Quote originally posted by JNathan:
Not a too bad idea but it needs a little work.
1-Sengoku, Gohan this comes from DBZ. Be creative, people like it when you came with something yourself instead of copying it.
2-Is the player's dad disparition involved in the beast or Neo Team Shadow?
3-The plot needs some work too.
This isn't a so bad idea but you need to work on it like i said above. Good luck with this.
1) I don't even watch dragonball... I thought of Sengoku (from One Piece) and Gohan because of rice...
2) Wouldn't that be spoiler on where he is?
3) Ok.
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