Thread: [Pokémon] Survival Project
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Old March 3rd, 2013 (06:31 PM).
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Awesome chapter as usual. It's kinda sad for Ezrem to be feeling that way.
Aw well. Awaiting for the next chapter.

And oh...

Quote:
“I guess so…” he said, looking at Ezrem oddly.
...
“Calm yourself, Kuiora,” Ezrem said, speaking for me.
These are a few of the errors that I have found. The chapter is where Ezrem himself is narrating, right?
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