Thread: [Pokémon] Survival Project
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Old March 4th, 2013 (04:56 PM).
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Quote originally posted by destinedjagold:
Awesome chapter as usual. It's kinda sad for Ezrem to be feeling that way.
Aw well. Awaiting for the next chapter.

And oh...



These are a few of the errors that I have found. The chapter is where Ezrem himself is narrating, right?
I'm glad you liked it. And fixed the errors. Those parts were supposed to be part of a different person's chapter, so yeah. Oops.

Quote originally posted by Astinus:
Good for Ezrem to be forgiven by those he cares about, and to begin to not . It's interesting that he's having a few literal "trials by fire", having to face the same element that killed his original trainer and then nearly got Rennio badly hurt.

I'm looking forward to seeing what Ezrem goes through to try and evolve. (Since I figure he will evolve by your banner.)
Yeah, guess that's kind of a spoiler, huh? Guess we'll have to find out. Thanks for commenting!
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