These are a few of the errors that I have found. The chapter is where Ezrem himself is narrating, right?
I'm glad you liked it. And fixed the errors. Those parts were supposed to be part of a different person's chapter, so yeah. Oops.
I'm looking forward to seeing what Ezrem goes through to try and evolve. (Since I figure he will evolve by your banner.)
Yeah, guess that's kind of a spoiler, huh? Guess we'll have to find out. Thanks for commenting!