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Old March 5th, 2013 (09:37 PM).
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Okay guys, internet is due in about 5 days, so I will resign to using the universities internet and, as such, will not be on as frequently.

@Leonknight: I see you are new to the board, Welcome. Keep an eye on your spelling and grammar, I noticed a couple of mistakes, but overall I enjoyed your SU, the only thing that really subtracted was that Leon doesn't really seem to have any flaws nor depth to him. After all, not everyone is flawless, if you could edit his personality to have some flaws and delve into his personality more, then I would be happy to accept you into the RP.

@Nakuzami: If you need to talk more, feel free to PM Skymin or myself to discuss this matter further.
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