Story seems interesting, though it would've had been maybe funnier if you were able to play as the father (With corespondenting OW).
But the mapping O.o
Alot of tile errors, 1 tile paths which make playing through maps annoying, and empty space.
If you aren't that well hire someone who maps for you there are alot of people around here :>
Also I see no scripts whatsoever, somehow I have the feeling there isn't really anything worth showing if you don't count the story.