Thread: [Pokémon] The story of a Charmander
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Old March 17th, 2013, 02:24 PM
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Shiny Charmander
 
Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: A cave full of Charmander's, Charmeleon's and Charizard's
Gender: Male
Nature: Naughty
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Also, are they just accepting that two dead Charmanders are laying on the floor all of a sudden? Where did they come from and why did they die? Is this normal in this world or is this something they should really be freaked out about? Think about it.
Blue was freaked out, he was crying over there dead bodys. Also the Charmanders where dead because a Pokemon broke in, should have put that in there.

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Nice beginning but what happened when the Cubone came? It just hit Abra and Charmander blew fire on it so that it fainted? More details and reason for actions could make this chapter less constricted and more interesting. :3
The Charmander was defending his new friend.
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