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Old April 10th, 2013, 09:19 AM
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What the duck?
 
Join Date: Jun 2011
Location: I`m lost D:
Gender: Male
Nature: Calm
@koopafan29 you got down most of what I asked by fixing the Team Genocide thing, but you never really fixed the shiny thing. I said make some reason the Electrike was shiny not just he randomly got a shiny Pokemon from an egg. (ex. He got the egg from people who perfected breeding methods of having a shiny Pokemon) just be creative on why he was shiny. Also touch up on grammar a tad. Once that's all done I'll accept you.
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