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Old April 10th, 2013, 05:38 PM
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What the duck?
 
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@koopfan29 most of it is fine, but you still need to either say he isn't shiny or make a GOOD reason he is shiny not what it is now saying he randomly hatched from an egg just be creative. If you can't think of anything just don't make him shiny. Once you do that I'll gladly accept you.