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Old April 20th, 2013 (10:32 AM).
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I love this. I love all of this. I don't have much to say about this though.

Halley, though she still irritates me beyond belief, is hilarious. I love her quote about teenage anxiety. That was beautiful.

I love N. I love how he speaks, how he acts, just how he is. He is still my favorite character, and I love how he interacts with the others.

Everything is moving so fast. It's beyond belief. I feel like just a minute ago they were having an innocent gym battle when Teiresias attacked them. This is incredibly fast-paced right now. At least to me.

I only have one question though. Either I forgot or wasn't paying attention, or it hasn't been revealed yet, but who is Weland? Apart from that just spectacular. If not for the interspersing of Pokemon here and there, I would forget this was a fanfiction. Beautiful work.
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