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Old May 7th, 2013 (3:29 AM).
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Originally Posted by Logiedan View Post
The solid black outline isn't that great, I would recommend just using a really dark shade of the yellow you have to go into the B/W style. For example, look at your Thunboar in that mockup screenshot, it uses a lot of dark outline and colours to really capture the B/W style which I'm assuming.

I personally don't like the style of the eyes, you could always add some of the white apart from the pupil. Kind of like Wartortle's eyes:
Thanks, you guys.

I redid the sprite as it was much too big. I took your advice about the eyes, and here is the result.

Also, here is another sprite I've done. The fire is supposed to be like it is, by the way. Here is Coalire.